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Add-on story! please help write
Last post 05-12-2008, 7:10 PM by Emberstone. 21 replies.
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03-15-2008, 8:38 AM |
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zootycoon2junki
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Add-on story! please help write
ok i would like to start a story. ill write the first part then each person after me will keep addingg-on and so on and so forth, k? ( and try to stay on the topic of the story, plz?) all right here i go:
Kaeti was running through the tall tan grass. She felt the rushing wind past her ears and felt the pelting rain on her back. She had to find shelter. Her stripes were dirty and her hooves ached. She could not deny it any longer. She was lost.
Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited, whereas imagination embraces the entire world, stimulating progress, giving birth to evolution. ~Albert Einstein
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03-20-2008, 4:19 PM |
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Joyce 2
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Re: Add-on story! please help write
Hey I thought of this idea, but anyways,
The lions were far behind her now, they had attacked her herd and she got seperated. Kaeti was a fast runner, but there were baby and elderly zebras back at home. Any one of them could have got killed. She knelt down in the soggy grass in the pouring rain and tried to rest. She shivered. It wasn't the cold, but the thought that lions could be here aswell.
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03-21-2008, 3:04 PM |
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Firesong
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Re: Add-on story! please help write
Unknown to Kaeti, the lead lioness, Ta'ri, was watching from the bushes. Her second, Selai, prepared to spring on the zebra.
"No!" Ta'ri hissed. "we wait, and our prey shall lead us back to the others we will soon attack."
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03-21-2008, 4:49 PM |
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zootycoon2junki
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sorry 4 taking ur idea, but thanx 4 posting!
Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited, whereas imagination embraces the entire world, stimulating progress, giving birth to evolution. ~Albert Einstein
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03-22-2008, 2:35 PM |
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Re: Add-on story! please help write
It’s not anybody’s idea. I’ve seen things like this way before one was posted here.

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03-22-2008, 9:18 PM |
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sodarousseaux
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Kaeti turned around. She was sure she had heard something creeping in the bushes.
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03-23-2008, 3:11 PM |
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Mozart
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Re: Add-on story! please help write
A movement and sound came from the bushes.Kaeti immediatly turned her head back.She knew something was near her.She only hoped it was another Zebra and not a lion, even though she was sure it was probly a lion.The Icey cold made her shiver again.
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03-24-2008, 4:59 PM |
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Re: Add-on story! please help write
RiverStrider:It’s not anybody’s idea. I’ve seen things like this way before one was posted here.
Oh sorry
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03-24-2008, 5:50 PM |
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Firesong
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Kaeti quickly scrambled to her feet. She knew she had to get out of there. Running over the soaked grass once again, she checked back over her shoulder and could just barely see a small disturbance following her though the tall grass. The rain was almost freezing it seemed, soaking through her fur. But she knew she had to keep going, no matter what.
 Pack Leader! Look in my bio! :)
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03-25-2008, 6:48 PM |
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The rain lashed in her face but still Kaeti ran, she was almost blinded by the rain that poured onto her face. She knew that the lions were probably behind her and that she had to get away, bet the pelting rain slowed her down. Then, her hoof got caught in some sticky mud and she fell face down into the ground.
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03-25-2008, 11:17 PM |
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Kaeti looked up, her face full of mud. Her heart pounded as she knelt on the ground. Her knees were grazed and her hooves ached, but she got back up. It was the fear that drove her. She was sure there were lions behind her, she could feel it. Kaeti ran, and ran, not knowing where she was going. The grass got longer and the ground got muddier. Trees started to branch overhead. For a second she thought she had outrun the lions, but no. They were there, somewhere.
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03-27-2008, 8:48 PM |
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mr.tonberryman
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Kaeti looked around her, breathless, searching for any sign of the lions amongst the tiny forest. She looked to the left and saw nothing. She looked to the right and saw nothing. She looked behind her, and still nothing. Relieved, but still cautious she decided to rest and catch her breath and she kneeled down on the grass. suddenly, a white shape, blurry because of it's speed, rushed to Kaeti's side. Kaeti stood back up, only to have a large blow to her side knock her back down. Kaeti looked above her and saw another lion, a white one, looking around, searching for something. "Please, please don't kill me!" she said, groaning in agony due to the large gash where the lion hit her. "I wasn't trying to kill you, I was trying to save you! Those lions are here, I can feel it. Now stay down so they won't see you!" "But aren't you one of them? And why did you hit me?" "Me, a savage like them? I'm disgusted even thinking it. If I was going to hunt, I'd do it with pride, not prey on the weak in large groups. And the reason I hit you was so you'd get down, though I didn't mean to hit you so hard. It'll heal though." Kaeti wanted to ask more questions, but she passed out from blood loss.
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03-28-2008, 11:26 PM |
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When Kaeti came back to contiousness the rain had stopped, there was no sign of any movement and the white lion that had hit her was also gone. The large gash had mostly stopped bleeding and the blood had clotted, Kaeti was still a little headed and the forrest seemed to be moving around her. Her head was spinning but she tried to get back up on her feet, in case the lions were still there, though if they were Kaeti was sure they would have killed her by now.
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03-29-2008, 7:11 PM |
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Suddenly something moved in the bushes. Kaeti stood stalk-still, afraid of what it could be. A large white lion walked out of them, something trailing behind him.
"Yuri!" Kaeti called, excitedly, as her 2 week old sister emerged from the bushes.
Kaeti and the lion exchanged bows of thanks, and the lion stalked off. "Beware of King, the pride leader, he is bloodthirsty..." was all he said.
Yuri was drenched, and shivering, her new body and hooves sore from all the rain, and running. Kaeti nuzzled her, then crawled into some brush- just thin enough for her to slide under. Yuri snuggled in next to her, her head resting on Kaeti's heaving side. She was soon asleep- but Kaeti wasn't. She sat, pondering about the strange white lion's intentions... Pondering about who he was.
Also, pondering- where was he now? And what he speaking the truth about King being bloodthirsty?
Pack Leader, It's sad to say goodbye, but you were a great friend. If you want to contact me still, you can always email me: molly_s@petlover.com. Thank you. Good luck with life and good bye, I'll miss you.
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03-29-2008, 11:53 PM |
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dinoboydanny
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Kaeti got up looking around to make sure the lions were not around. She walked to the nile river and drank some water. She saw a log next to her it lunged at her. (it was a croc) She got badly injured and walked away.
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