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Yes,I am crazed about Warriors by Erin Hunter,but I'm going to try and not copy any names!

 

"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the waterfall for a Clan meeting!" Lightningflash,the leader of StormClan,called out. Around 20 tigers gathered. "It is time for two kits to become apprentices!" She continued. She looked around her forest camp for Fernkit and Skykit. Ah,there they are. I hope they don't get into too much trouble. she thought. "Fernkit! Skykit! Beneath the waterfall!" She yowled. Fernkit slowly approached his leader. Skykit bounded forward,rushing past her brother in her eagerness. "Yes,I know your ready,Skykit. Skykit,do you promise to listen to your mentor,follow the warrior code,and protect your Clan even at the cost of your life?" Skykit nearly fell over with excitment. "I do!" she squealed. "Then by the powers of StarClan,I give you your apprentice name and your mentor! From this day forward,untill you earn your warrior name,you will be known as Skypaw! Your mentor shall be Longclaw." Longclaw,a huge tiger with unusally long claws,prowled forward,touched noses with Skypaw,and sat next to her. "Fernkit,do you promise to listen to your mentor,follow the warrior code,and protect your Clan even at the cost of your life?" Fernkit bowed his head. "I do." "Then by the powers of StarClan,I give you your apprentice name! From this day forward,untill you earn your warrior name,you shall be known as Fernpaw. You have a very special mentor,me!" Lightningflash leapt down from her perch on the rock on the waterfall and touched noses. "This meeting is dismissed."

 

Whatcha think,should I go on? Yes I know I copied some things from the books,but I couldn't resiest posting this.

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I love all warriors storys.

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yesss the warior cats r awsome i only read the first book but i really liked it...

 

my favorite is leafpaw

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My favorite is Cinderpelt,I absolutely love her! Its great that she was "re-born" as Cinderpaw.

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If you've only read the first book, how do you know Leafpaw?

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Alright,time to continue! Quick little change,though. I was tired when I wrote this and accidently wrote Lightningflash instead of Lightningstar. The story will follow Fernpaw and Skypaw,but mostly Skypaw. For those who haven't guessed who the criminal is,keep guessin!

 

Skypaw was touring the forest with Longclaw. She was proud to have such a magnificent warrior as her mentor. Along the way she was pouncing leaves,ignoring the dissapproving glares from her mentor. "Longclaw! Longclaw! Look what I found!" Skypaw nudged a claw in front of him. "It doesn't smell like StormClan." Longclaw hissed. "I should've known. This is a claw of a LightClan warrior. They must be hunting in our territory! We must alert Lightningstar at once!" He ran back toward the camp,with Skypaw running loudly behind him.

 

Fernpaw sighed in the apprentice den. He was supposed to go hunting with Lightningstar,but he was stuck in the den. He didn't want to sleep in case Lightningstar decided to take him hunting or training. He leapt to his paws as Longclaw and Skypaw ran in,and Longclaw yowled. "Lightningstar! LightClan warriors are hunting in our territory! We must attack!" Lightningstar bolted out of her den. "Longclaw,Skypaw,Fernpaw,Swiftrunner,Blackstripe! Come with me! We shall punish them for intruding and theft!"

 

Longclaw yowled in anger as he saw the LightClan patrol,with their prey! "How dare you hunt in our territory! You shall die today!" Longclaw leapt at the leader of the patrol,a small but strong tiger. Claws flashed as the tigers fought,and yowls were heard all around. Skypaw leapt on top of a huge cat,and bit his neck. The enemy hissed in pain and ran off. Skypaw was strong,even for her first battle. She squealed as she was knocked over. An apprentice was trying to kill her! She went limp,and when the enemy sunk her teeth into Skypaw's flesh,she leapt up with all her strength and flung the apprentice toward the trees. The tiger widened her eyes and fled. The battle was over in miniutes,and StormClan had won back their territory.

 

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I think they accidently picked up a New Prophecy book.

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Sorry it took so long to get chapter three up,but I promise I'll get them in faster.

 

Skypaw and Longclaw were hunting together. They had managed to catch 2 mice and Skypaw had caught a bird. Then Longclaw asked,"What can you scent?" Skypaw sniffed the air and then paniced. "TWO-LEGS!" She shrieked. Longclaw widened his eyes. "We have to get back to camp,NOW!" he yowled. They both began to head toward the camp,but it was too late. The two-legs had found them. AND they were armed with the tigers worst fear - guns. One of the howled in triumph and made a shot at Longclaw. Both tigers bolted away,but the twoleg shot toward Longclaw. And that was it for him. Longclaw cried out in pain and fell to the ground,dead. But before he died he ordered Skypaw to get out of here. Skypaw nodded and bolted towards camp in fear. The twolegs yelled at her and chased her,but Skypaw was too fast. She managed to make it to camp! But she had to deliver the news to Lightningstar.

 

Fernpaw heard his sister crash into camp. "Skypaw! Whats going on? Wheres Longclaw?!" Skypaw's tail drooped and she whispered. "Twolegs shot him." She said nothing more and padded toward Lightningstar's den. Fernpaw was stung. Twolegs shot Longclaw? He was one of the fastest and strongest cats in the Clan!

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"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join beneath the waterfall for a Clan meeting." Lightningstar called out. When everyone had gathered,she delivered the news. "Longclaw is dead. He was shot by twolegs,and they almost got young Skypaw." The Clan gasped and whispered to one another. "Skypaw also needs a new mentor. Wolfheart,come forward please." Wolfheart,a small tiger who was recently made a warrior,nodded and came over. "Wolfheart,you've proven yourself to be a very valuable warrior to the Clan. I hope you will pass everything you know down to young Skypaw." Wolfheart lowered his eyes,still thinking of Longclaw's death,and touched noses with Skypaw. "Train her well." Lightningstar whispered.

 

Sorry this one is so short,next one will be longer!

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Cool story!!

It is very good!

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