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Last post 06-20-2008, 6:16 PM by Animals Rule!. 47 replies.
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  •  04-07-2008, 6:38 PM 95323 in reply to 95024

    Re: Star-Cat

    Chapter five:

     

    The journey back to the NightEmpire was long and hard. Shadowfire kept avoiding her friends, which was simple since they were lead as prisoners and she was not. She didn't want them to pass judgement on her decision to join the NightEmpire. Later on the second day of the journey, Flameclaw slowed his pace to walk beside her.

    "You made the right choice. Your destiny is with us." Shadowfire did not respond. Flameclaw tried again. "Come see me after night-meal, we need to staart training." He still got no answer, so he picked up his pace and went back to the front of the group.

    Later that evening, Shadowfire went to see Flameclaw at the edge of a clearing in the forest they had entered that morning.

     

    oops, sorry, my mom's calling me for dinner. I'll type more soon.




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  •  04-07-2008, 8:58 PM 95357 in reply to 95323

    Re: Star-Cat

    oh! i just noticed something. this was the story idea that i chose! better read this! *goes back to first page of thread and starts reading*
  •  04-10-2008, 7:05 PM 95705 in reply to 95357

    Re: Star-Cat

    Sorry about that, here's more of that chapter:

     

    When she entered the clearing, Shadowfire stopped, puzzeled. There was no sign of Flameclaw. Suddenly something hit Shadowfire from behind, and she landed on the grass with Flameclaw on top of her.

    "Always be aware of your surroundings," he hissed. "You never know when an enemy may be lurking." Flameclaw leaped away from Shadowfire and stood looking at her in the center of the clearing as she stood to face him.

    "And you are my enemy." said Shadowfire.

    "Yes and no." came the cryptic response. Flameclaw twitched his tail. "What is your name? I never asked. I am Flameclaw, of course."

    "Shadowfire."

    Flameclaw tilted his head. "Your name fits you."

    There was silence as Flameclaw stepped forward. "Shadowfire, I spent my life training myself to master and enhance my powers." Flameclaw spoke quietly and earnestly. "You were able to resist me and probably could have won our fight when you didn't even know you had your powers. You have an amazing gift and it is my job to teach you how to use it. But first, I must show you your destiny. Come." Flameclaw beconed with his tail and dissapeared through a clump of ferns. Her tail twitching uneasily, Shadowfire followed.

    Suddenly she cried out as the ground dropped from beneath her feet and she found herself sliding down a tunnel. She emerged in a cave, with a dark, forboding pool of black water in front of her. Flameclaw stood on the other side of the pool.

    "Lie next to the water and touch your nose to it." he ordered. Trembling, Shadowfire obeyed. As soon as she closed her eyes cold began to seep into her body, chilling her from the inside out. Startled, Shadowfire opened her eyes.

    Instead of the cave she was in before, she was now in a huge, dark cavern. In front of her the darkness seemed to grow, coalescing into a firece, midnight-black cat.

    "Who are you!?" asked Shadowfire.

    "I am the enemy of enemies, the counqueror of conquerors. And I will show you your destiny." the voice that came out of the cat sounded as though many cats were speaking. "and yes, you are dreaming, but this is also real."

    "Why-why am I here?" asked Shadowfire.

    "A Star-cat is coming. They are the enemy of all you will stand for. They must not be allowed to complete their mission. Go to the place where the moon shines on stone like a flame. There will be one who stands in your way, who helps the Star-cat. You must win that fight. You are the Night-cat, the savior of our world. You must not fail."

    Then the cavern faded to black once more.




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  •  04-10-2008, 8:28 PM 95711 in reply to 95357

    Re: Star-Cat

    Write More Please

    http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=1952512&PHPSESSID=30bbb46e250b2d071386208f683fa08a
  •  04-29-2008, 5:20 PM 98045 in reply to 95711

    Re: Star-Cat

    I'm back to write more, finally! I've been really busy! I can't write right now because I don't have any ideas, but I will definately write more tommorow. Really sorry, just thought I'd say I haven't forgotten about this!

     




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  •  04-30-2008, 12:16 AM 98120 in reply to 98045

    Re: Star-Cat

    Firesong:

    I'm back to write more, finally! I've been really busy! I can't write right now because I don't have any ideas, but I will definately write more tommorow. Really sorry, just thought I'd say I haven't forgotten about this!

     

    I'm glad that you haven't forgotten Firesong, well i hope that you get some ideas sooooooonBig Smile [:D]  I hate having to wait for all of the good storiesWink [;)]


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  •  05-05-2008, 7:14 AM 98678 in reply to 98120

    Re: Star-Cat

    Chapter 6 (finally!)

     

    Skystar awoke suddenly, scrambling to her paws anxiously. When she finally realized where she was, she sat down by the waters' edge. Go to the place where the moon shines on rock like a flame... the light-cat's words rang in her mind. And what was the Night-cat she was supposed to defeat? Well, at least in these caverns there was plenty of reddish rock. She decided to go deeper into the caverns to see what she could find. But first, she would hunt.

    The strange light from the moss seemed to be enough for small plants to grow, somehow, and the cave was also home to many small creatures. Skystar scented a small rodent-like animal close by. Dropping low to the ground, her paws barely touched the ground as she creaped towards it. Then she pounced, trapping her prey with thorn-sharp claws before killing and eating it.

    Re-energized, Skystar set off deeper into the caverns. A few hours passed, Skystar just walking along the tunnel, taking so many twists and turns she couldn't remember where she was. She just hoped there was some sort of an exit close by.

    Suddenly, she picked up a faint scent---cats! Many, many cats, all in one cavern somewhere nearby. Quickening her pace, Skystar set off again, towards the scent. Soon she could hear them too, talking in low, hushed voices, and could smell their fear-scent. Turning abruptly, she emerged into a large cavern filled with other cats. They were thin, but strong looking, and looked as though they weren't so happy about her intrusion.

    "Who are you?" growled the lead cat. "And what are you doing here?"

     

     

    What do you think so far?




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  •  05-06-2008, 4:55 PM 98796 in reply to 98678

    Re: Star-Cat

    Great!!!  Keep going!

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  •  05-06-2008, 7:43 PM 98812 in reply to 98796

    Re: Star-Cat

    Awesome, really good, i like it.....no wait....I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    but i'm confused does she have to defeat herself because she is the cat that has been told to defeat the star catTongue Tied [:S] well, but this is soooooo goood, i'll go insane if you don't continue itBig Smile [:D]Smile [:)]Big Smile [:D]Smile [:)]Big Smile [:D]

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  •  05-08-2008, 5:21 PM 99074 in reply to 98812

    Re: Star-Cat

    No, Nightfire has to defeat the sun-cat, Skystar has to defeat the night-cat.

    I sense a battle coming, if you know what I mean.

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  •  05-09-2008, 7:08 AM 99152 in reply to 99074

    Re: Star-Cat

    Shadowfire is the Night-cat. We don't know who the Star-cat is. Skystar needs to help the Star-cat by defeating the Night-cat. Shadowfire need to defeat the cat that is helping the Star-cat, and complete their mission before the Star-cat could.


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  •  05-09-2008, 5:17 PM 99200 in reply to 99074

    Re: Star-Cat

    oops, wrong name, its Shadowfire, not Nightfire... I get confuzzled.

    sorry about that

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  •  05-09-2008, 6:28 PM 99217 in reply to 99200

    Re: Star-Cat

    ohhhh, okay, now i understand.... i think, but when are you going to continue it?

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  •  05-11-2008, 2:54 PM 99424 in reply to 99200

    Yes [Y] Re: Star-Cat

    WOW!

    This is the best story I have EVER read keep up the good work firesong


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  •  05-12-2008, 7:06 AM 99477 in reply to 99424

    Re: Star-Cat

    Thanks. I'll continue soon, but I don't have enough time today.


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