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Thanks all of you the newest one should be up very soon

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!

its very good!

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Here is my newset chapter. Enjoy, and respond!

The battle had started as soon as my brother yelled "three!" Then my sister, Alva, pounced. I didn’t even knew I moved but some how I did and my sister hit the cave wall with a "bang." She charged once more, this time I jumped up and landed on her back, giving a yelp of pain and surprise, she growled, "Cheater! That’s not fair!" I yelled back, "Tough!" The battle went on for what seemed to be minutes. Then, I saw my opening, pouncing, I knocked my sister off her feet and she rolled. Finally coming to a stop only because I stopped her and was over holding my paw in a slashing position, I growled at her, "Not so weak, am I? Now take back what you said before!" Before she could answer a roar that could have shook the mountains rang from the entrance at our cave. As we all looked up we saw it was our mother, and not looking very happy either. Before I could move my sister whimpered and yelped, " Get her off! I didn’t do anything! She attacked me for no reason! She’s hurting me!" As our mother trotted up, I got off my sister, looking at her with daggers of eyes. My sister went up to our mother limping and whimpering, and acting as if crying. While out mother calmed her down, my brothers, knowing that this was all not true, tried to tell my mother that was not the true story. Yet my mother would hear nothing from them and sent us to bed immediately. Once they were fast asleep, I crept away from them, heading for the opening of the cave. Once I reached the end, I looked up seeing hundreds of lights, I thought to myself, these are the most beautiful things I have ever seen. With one last glance, I saw a shooting star soaring threw the sky, instinctively I wish upon that star, and only time would tell if it truly came true.

New chapters will be out faster than this, and again, Enjoy!!!!!!!!!

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!

Wow! You are a very good writer. Please continue soon.

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WOW, this is really good, you should definately definatly continue

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Thank you, all of you! The newst story should be out soon

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!

goo, gr8, keep going

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Here is my latest chapter, hope you all like it, please post!

Chapter 3:

The Shot Heard Round the World

It had been months since our fight and me and my sister had never been the same. She tried to beat me at everything, well she tried. When we woke up that morning our mother said that today was a special day. None of said a word as we headed to a new area. Suddenly our mother stopped abruptly, laying low to the ground. Then, out of nowhere we heard leaves crunch, and twigs crack. Voices of some unknown language where approaching. We were now down low to the ground, ever time my sister started to pester my mother, she nearly clawed her. As they approached they were animals, yet they didn’t seem like animals. They where flabby, and fur less and they walked on two legs, while there front legs were holding huge, hard looking sticks. They set something up, then got up laughing, I had a sudden urge to jump and attack, but something held me back and told me "No" Then out of nowhere my sister stepped out of the brush and started right at them. The creatures looked scared then pointed his stick at my sister, a "Roar" and a "Bang" ran threw the jungle, and I was sure that it would never leave the jungle. Before I knew it we were running, running for our lives. Then 2 "bang" sounded, seconds after that happened a throbbing pain shot threw my shoulder, yet I did not stop running. Once we where back in the den my mother rounded on my sister, "What were you thinking, you could have killed yourself, I could have lost you." As my mother yelled and ranted about my sisters stupidity, no one seemed to know that I had collapsed, until my mother ceased yelling, but was about to until, Kaden said sounding rather scared said, "Mom? Some things happen to Kita. She’s hurt, I think from those creatures stick." My mother rounded on me looking very worried. I was still laying on the ground, my eyes, slowly closing. She didn’t say a word, but only licked my wounds, which I found out was across my right shoulder, and one had skimmed the top of my head. That night was the worst night, ever. The thought of those creatures so near, and me so injured, kept my mother awake all night, and all day. The next day we learned what those creatures where, they were: Humans!

Here is my latest chapter, it is longer than normal, because I couldn't stop.

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!

You are such a good writer! And I also love the long chapters! Alot of people do short chapters.

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Wonderful, wonderful! its great, oh, and i always perfer longer chapters, they are more satisfying

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yay, more!

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I love it, its really good, please continue

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MORE MORE MORE!

I agree with everyone, it's a good story...I like ones about tigers.  And like the others I read I can't wait to see where it goes. :3

Here is my latest chapter, sorry it took so long.

Chapter 4

The Hunt of Firsts

It had been a month since I was shot by poachers. My shoulder was healing well, all that was left was a small scar. We were growing fast and we were almost a big as my mother, well me and my oldest brother. Today, was a good day because we were going hunting. We stalked across my mothers territory careful not to tread into any of the animals we were hunting. "Hurry up, if you keep going at this pace all our prey will be long gone before we even get any sight of them!" Growled my mother. I didn’t know what was wrong with my mother, maybe it was hunger, or because she was getting ready to get rid of us, I heard her mumbling in her sleep. Soon I was stopped by a growl of my sister, Alva, because I stepped on her foot. "Watch out, big-foot!" I almost made a comment but before I could, my mother got into stalking position. In seconds we were also in that position. My mother was getting ready to give us instructions when a roar, burst out of the bushes. We all stared wide-eyed in disbelief as, can you believe it my sister went racing where our prey could see, hear, and out distance her. Running away, giggling our prey pranced away. As she came back our mother roared, "Why did You do that? Now we have to find them AGAIN! I spent days in hunger, just so you could have an easy day of unexpected prey!" "But, mom, I thought I could do it, without any help." Alva said staring down at her paws. Then I intervened at the point my mother had the look of murder in her eyes. "Mom, they couldn’t have gotten that far, we can try again." "Fine." My mom said, then looking at Alva. "But you, Alva, Won’t hunt or eat." Alva stammered, then fell silent.

Once we reached our prey, again! We each found targets, well except Alva. Then we lunged and in the end we all got our targets, and I had the biggest kill, and I had gotten my kill first. We began to dig in when my mother attacked Alva, we turned around away from our kills to find out Alva had been trying to steal from our mother. Me and my brothers hurried up and ate our food, before our mother rounded her anger on us. We soon left, with my mom keeping an extra eye on Alva. That night I fell asleep under the stars at the front of the cave.

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!