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Last post 06-20-2008, 6:16 PM by Animals Rule!. 47 replies.
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  •  05-20-2008, 5:49 PM 100674 in reply to 99477

    Re: Star-Cat

    really sorry I keep taking so long to post chapters! It's probably a good thing though, because today when I was walking home from school I thought of a great idea for another character, and she wouldn't have been in the story if I had continued earlier.

    Chapter 6 continued:

    "I- I'm just passing through." stammered Skystar. The male tabby cat who had asked the question looked very strong and fierce, and all the cats looked desperate. She decided she would be lucky to get out of this without a fight.

    "We'll see about that." he growled. "Guards!"

    Two large white cats stalked toward her, trapping her between them. The tabby beckoned with his tail to a small ginger she-cat. "Lightpelt! Fetch our leader!" he ordered. Lightpelt nodded, and hurried off through another tunnel.

    "Are you working for the Night-Empire?" hissed the tabby.

    "No!" exclaimed Skystar.

    "Well then why are you here? I think you're here to spy!" he growled, preparing to pounce.

    "Razorclaw! Back down! I gave no order to attack the newcomer!"

    Skystar's breath caught in her throat. The voice that had spoken was wonderfully, hauntingly familier.

    The cat stepped into view, her beautiful sleek brown tabby pelt shimmering in the light from the strange moss, her eyes glowing golden.

    "Dawnstar," whispered Skystar.

    The she-cat's eyes widened. "Skystar?" she meowed in disbelief.

    "I thought I'd never see you again!" Skystar bounded over the other cat, gazing into the depths of her golden eyes.

    Dawnstar pressed her muzzle to Skystar's pelt. "I would never forget you." she murmered.

    "After the Night-Empire attacked, I thought you were dead!" Skystar thought back to when the Night-Empire had attacked the rebel camp where she lived, remembering her terror as Flameclaw killed her parents, and she thought he had captured Dawnstar too. She thought only she and her three friends had survived. Dawnstar had been the one she trusted, the one she knew would listen to her problems and answer her questions. Skystar confided everything in her.




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  •  05-20-2008, 10:50 PM 100722 in reply to 99477

    Re: Star-Cat

    Firesong:
    Thanks. I'll continue soon, but I don't have enough time today.

    I hope you have time soon, cause i love love love this story, its so so good, PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!


    http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=1952512&PHPSESSID=30bbb46e250b2d071386208f683fa08a
  •  05-22-2008, 2:23 PM 100830 in reply to 100722

    Re: Star-Cat

    Animals Rule!:

    Firesong:
    Thanks. I'll continue soon, but I don't have enough time today.

    I hope you have time soon, cause i love love love this story, its so so good, PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!

    Smile [:)] I just did.Smile [:)] *sigh* this is the only problem with premoderating, sometimes you post something before another person's shows up.




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  •  05-22-2008, 4:56 PM 100856 in reply to 100722

    Re: Star-Cat

    lol, isnt it wierd that you get the best ideas at the most random times?

    Its still a great story!!!!!!!!

    Aries25Moon [mo]


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  •  05-22-2008, 7:28 PM 100878 in reply to 100856

    Re: Star-Cat

    This story is great, i love it continue please, you are such a good writer
    http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=1952512&PHPSESSID=30bbb46e250b2d071386208f683fa08a
  •  05-30-2008, 6:42 PM 102072 in reply to 100878

    Re: Star-Cat

    "You know this cat?" growled Razorclaw.

    "Yes, now go investigate the caverns where she came from in case Night-Empire cats followed her. Skystar, you can come with me to my cave. We have much to talk about." Dawnstar sounded exasperated with the large tabby, who finally beckoned with his tail to the two white guards, and all three left the cavern. Skystar quickly followed Dawnstar into an adjoining cave. In there, the moss grew much more numerously, casting its otherworldly light on the two cats. For the first time in the caverns, Skystar got a good look at Dawnstar.

    Her long-haired brown tabby pelt still shone, and her golden eyes still glowed, but she was different. She was thinner, for one thing. This must be another rebel camp, Skystar thought. And there must not be very much prey down here, and they have many cats. And even as the two cats went to sit down, Dawnstar's ears pricked with wariness. Her eyes seemed to be tired, but there was defiance in them as well. And joy, too, at seeing Skystar. She's different, thought Skystar. But then again, so am I.

    "I'm so happy to see you again," meowed Dawnstar, her eyes glowing with warmth. For a moment, Skystar wanted to run to her and press her nose to her fur. But she was not a kit anymore.

    "After the attack, Shadowfire, Rockpelt, Brightsoul, and me followed the stream until we met a old cat who told us about these caves..." Skystar went on to tell the whole story of her journey to the caverns, about being chased every step of the way by the Night-Empire. About completeing the journey, only to lose her friends on the other side of the rockfall. And then arriving here.

    Dawnstar comfortingly pressed her nose to Skystar's muzzle. "I'm sure Shadowfire and the others can evade the Night-Empire. You all did it once, after all."

    Skystar blinked with gratitude. Then she hesitated. "Dawnstar, I--I had a dream," she meowed. "There was a golden cat, who told me my destiny was to help the Star-cat defeat the Night-cat, so the Star-cat can make things the way they were before the Night-Empire. He told me to go to the place where the moon shines on rock like a flame." She glanced up, hoping Dawnstar would believe her.

    To her relief, Dawnstar simply answered by saying, "I don't know about the moon, but I know about flaming rocks. There is a fire-mountain a little ways away from here. you go through the caverns until you reach the fire-rivers, and then go up."

    "You believe me?" Skystar asked.

    "Do you believe your dream is real?" Dawnstar asked in return. Skystar nodded.

    "Then yes, I believe you."

    Dawnstr hesitated before adding, "Whatever happens, Skystar, remember this. Things are not always as they seem, the world may not be as it appears. You should leave in the morning for the fire-mountain. I can't come with you, but I will wait for you, as long as it takes. You're my friend, Skystar, and I've already lost you once."

    Skystar said nothing, but twined her tail with the other cat's in silent thanks.

    "You can sleep in the cave next to this, I keep it reserved for newcomers or guests." Dawnstar let out a meow of laughter. "Not that there are many guests, mind you. You should go and get some sleep now, you have a long journey ahead of you."

    Skystar nodded, and settled down in a nest. She let sleep wash over her like a wave, Dawnstar's words still ringing in her ears. Things are not always as they seem.....




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  •  06-01-2008, 4:36 PM 102322 in reply to 102072

    Re: Star-Cat

    This is so good, i love it, please continue!
    http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=1952512&PHPSESSID=30bbb46e250b2d071386208f683fa08a
  •  06-06-2008, 6:47 AM 103104 in reply to 102322

    Re: Star-Cat

    Shadowfire leaped up and hurtled out of the cave with the black pool. Gasping for breath, she finally emerged in the small clearing they had been in. Flameclaw was sitting calmly, waiting for her.

    "Now you understand, don't you, Shadowfire? You know what you must be. You are the Night-cat, it is your destiny," meowed Flameclaw.

    "The cat told me-- it told me I had to go to the place where the moon shines on rock like a flame." murmered Shadowfire.

    Flameclaw narrowed his eyes. Suddenly they shot open again, as he realized what it meant.

    "Turn around!!" yowled Flameclaw, bounding back to the waiting NightEmpire warriors. "Turn around, we have to go back to the volcano!!"

    He turned around to fix Shadowfire with a hard stare. "You have power, Shadowfire. Are you prepared to do what you must to keep it? Are you ready to fight?"

    "Yes," Shadowfire whispered. "I have to, it's my destiny."

    "Then come." he ordered, and the cats headed off again.

     

    Sorry for such a short chapter. I'll write the next chapter soon.




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  •  06-06-2008, 3:31 PM 103179 in reply to 102322

    Re: Star-Cat

    WOW, this is so good please continue, i like it!!!!!
    http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=1952512&PHPSESSID=30bbb46e250b2d071386208f683fa08a
  •  06-09-2008, 4:33 PM 103500 in reply to 103179

    Re: Star-Cat

    Thanks Animals Rule, I really appreciate your support, but I would like other people to post before I continue. You're the only person responding.


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  •  06-09-2008, 5:27 PM 103513 in reply to 103500

    Re: Star-Cat

    I'm still reading.  It's a great story, good plot line.  And I love warriors

    Anyway, Its great!!

    Aries25Moon [mo]


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  •  06-09-2008, 6:00 PM 103522 in reply to 100674

    Re: Star-Cat

    I   LOVE IT!Please continue!



    The rocky path of life..
    I walk it,I stumble...
    I'll keep on going...
  •  06-09-2008, 6:44 PM 103540 in reply to 103522

    Re: Star-Cat

    I'm still reading.  Please continue. Smile [:)]

    Thanks Firesong for the awesome sig!
  •  06-10-2008, 2:24 PM 103639 in reply to 103540

    Re: Star-Cat

    Okay, I'll continue. Not right now though, I have a lot of homework. Maybe later today.


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  •  06-15-2008, 8:38 AM 104418 in reply to 103639

    Re: Star-Cat

    "The NightEmpire!! The NightEmpire is here!!!" someone screeched. Skystar leaped awake.

    "Dawnstar?" she called. "Dawnstar, what's happening?" Skystar scrambled out of the cave where she had been sleeping. Dawnstar ran over to her.

    "Skystar, you have to leave, now! Our scouts spotted the NightEmpire's army. They're coming to attack, somehow they know we are here."

    Skystar looked into Dawnstar's eyes, nodded, and sprinted farther down the tunnels. Behind her, she could hear the screeches of cats in battle. Suddenly the air started getting warmer. And then, when Skystar rounded a corner, she saw it. The fire rivers.




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