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Life has been different since my mother Moonrise was killed and my father Solaris had abandon us. My oldest sister took charge after our mother and father had left. Her name is Moon she is a strong, smart, intelligent wolf just like our mom was. My Mom had six pups and I am the youngest Zeus is my older brother, he started a pack of his own and left. Than it is Moon, Orbit, solaria, Milky way, and me Starlight.

My Mom had five females and one male. My pack was consider a small one but not for long. My sister moon is pregnant by our new alpha male Mountain. Only the alpha male and female were allowed to mate and if anyone was to mate they were to be kicked out of the pack and to never come back. I had made that mistake I am 4 weeks pregnant but that was not the worst part I had mated with the alpha male I knew my time in my family pack was over.

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Chaper 1

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"Starlight how could you do this to me and the rest of the pack" Moon looked at me with tears falling out of her eyes."Moon it is not my fault he made me I, I told him no but he didn't listen". " Just shut up Starlight I will not believe you. Mountain would never go so low, you always making trouble for us all Starlight".I began to cry now. My own sister had went against me I had nowhere to turn to she was going to kick me out the pack. "moon you have to believe me please. what would mom do she would believe me" I looked into Moons eyes. "Moon stop crying and looked at me with anger. "If mom was here she would let you right back into the pack like she always did , she liked you best you were her little baby and could get away with anything you cause so much trouble you are the reason mom is dead" This time I stop crying " Are you blaming moms deaf on me I had nothing to do with moms deaf". " So you think, if mom would not have had to go looking for you she would not have been killed by that hunter". " You are lying I hate" I lunged at Moon and bite her neck, she threw me off and the fight began. Moon lunged at me and bit my leg and I began to bleed. I manage to stand up and pounce on her back and rip at her grey fur. Once agian she throw me off , but this time she grab my neck and would not let go. I was losing breath. I could fill myself losing grip on my life. I was getting ready to break away when she let go."Starlight you are my little sister I know that but you are pregnant and disrespected the whole pack. I don't ever want to see you by my pack agian. DON'T COME BACK STARLIGHT.

It is really good

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!

Chapter 2

Life on my own

Twenty-one days and nights has slowly pasted since I left the pack. That many days is about three human weeks so what I have learned from my mother. My wound on my leg has healed, but hurts when I walk on it. My fur which was light grey and white with brown dashes was now the color of a dirty grey cloth.

I was due around another week when the sun was away, and the sky must be filled with billions of star, and the moon must be full. When my pups are born I will start my own pack and up rise against my sister Moon. This morning I woke feeling more tired than I ever had before. I could feel my pups kicking my insides. They must be hungry so I got up from my den and went out for food. My den was small, but it fit me comfortably. I knew I would have to make a bigger one for me and my pups. I usually scavenged for my meals, but I had to eat something fresh if I wonted to stay healthy for my pups. I went north where my old pack caught the perfect meals and hoped they found new places to hunt. When I reached my destination I made sure no other wolf was around. After I made sure the coast was clear I began to hunt. When one wolf hunts it was very hard but I had to do my best, I had to or else I would go home hungry. I stocked the ground for a sign of life, when a huge brown hare bounced out the ground and landed right in front of me. I could not believe my luck. It did not see me the grasses cover my body well. I slowly stocked it, watching its every move. I was ready to make the kill, I was inches away from it when I heard the sound of a howl. I looked behind me, stand on top of a hill were my sisters Moon, Orbit, Solaria ,and Milky Way. My heart began to pound out of my crest I knew my life was over. They began to charge after me I ran for my life and dashed into the forest. The hare bounced the other way. Lucky for me it distracted them and I got away. I went home back to my den to keep my heart at a normal rate. I tried to take a nap but my stomach grumped furiously. I had to eat so, I would hunt tonight.

Wonderful, Great, please write more!

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!

i like it, continue

 

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Chapter 3

Solar The White Wolf  

I was wide awake when nightfall reached me, I was ready to hunt. I walk south this time, I could not take another risk again. I hated to be out at night becuase anything could be watching me. I was getting very close to the hunting area, when I smelt something so delicious that I turned and followed it. I came to a broken fence and seen what smelt so good. It was sheep a whole flock of sheep sleeping. Behind the sheep was a house that was dark. I hopped over the fence and quicky walked up to the sheep. I open my graws wide and snapped shut tightly on one of the sheep neck. Its eyes brusted open and it looked at me.I slowly drag it out of the fence, I was so tightly shut on its neck that it could not make a sound. Once I was outside the fence I slowly let go of its neck to breath. It layed on the ground and did not move,but it began to talk to me "Please spare my life, My baby needs me"."What, you have a baby" I look at it now noticing she was a female."Yes she was born yesterday please let me go she needs me" she looked at me with fear. " I need to eat, I am pregnant what am I suppose to do". "Please I am sorry for your condition but please my daughter needs me"she now began to get up." I'm sorry but I have to eat". I pushed her back down and grab hold of her neck. she was losing breath I could taste her blood driping threw my teeth Its tasted so good. Then I looked into her eyes and she was crying, But that was not all that I seen.I saw myself and moon when she had hold of my neck. I could not do it i let her neck go." Please stop crying I will not kill you I can't do it". the sheep got up and thank me and she limped back to flock. Then she made a loud cry and woke up every sheep. the house lit up with light and a old man came out with a shotgun. He seen me and shot towards me. I darted  into the woods when I ran right into a white male Wolf.

Really wonderful!

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!

I like it! continue! wait a minute, i just realized that the wolf has the same name as the horse in my story, oh well, i don't care, its a good story, so please continue

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Thank you dragon rider and animals rule for comenting my story

 

Chaper four 

Winter The Wolf

The white wolf looked at me and I looked at him. He was a beautiful wolf and he stood powerfully, and his deep yellow eyes lit up my soul. "Starlight you did a wonderful thing back their"he said as he appoached me."Umm, thank you but how do you know my name". I knew you mother she saved me when I was a pup. I was the same age as you, your brother, and your sisters. Your to young to remember all our eyes were closed. Your mother seperated me from the rest of you because you father did not want someone not of the family to be raised around his pups and your mother took me to a different cave and continued to raise me. When I was six months old she told me about how I lost my pack and how she was not my real mother. I left the same night she told me that in search for my real pack but I never found them. I would come back to the cave she raised me in and I would watch you and your siblings play. Your mom use to still come see me but then she never came back. Then I seen Moon abandon you from the pack and she said you mother had died. I never knew that in till that moment. I been following you ever since that day." But why have you been following me" I asked. " I think your a beautiful Girl and I really liked you". My body began to shake with love. " Are you serious about this" I looked at him and almost fell apart. " Yes I'm very serious". " Wait, what is your name". "My name is Winter, your mother named me that"."Starlight May I please Join you and be you mate for life". "Yes you can Winter". He licked my face and I licked his. " You are Pregnant am I right" Said Winter as he looked at my stomach. "Yes I am and I am very hungry". "Wait right here" Winter went behind a tree and brought out a buck deer. I went over to the meat and we ate dinner together. My pack was now Begining .   

yeah this is very good! Please write as much as you can before the 27th!

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!

Wonderful story, I love the way its unfolding! Winter and Starlight will make such an adorable couple- and such a great plotline for the rest of this story! Write more!

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Chaper 5

A New Life

I did not go back to my old den instead Winter took me to his den. His den was much more bigger than my small one. we were completely out of my old territory as well. "Do you like it, cause if you don't we could move to another one" said winter as he looked around for a place to sit. " This is a perfect place to have and raise my pups" I said siting next to Winter." Oh yeah about the pups, I always want to be a father and I was wondering when they are born could they call me dad". "What else do you think they are going to call you"I smiled at him and he smiled back. "Who are they real father if you don't mind me asking". I looked at the ground and felt so much disapointment." Everyone thinks I mated with Mountain but thats not true. He was like a father to me and he wanted to protect me from Moon. He told the pack he made me mate with him so he can get the blame and he would be abandon from the pack, but his plan back fired. Moon needed Mountain to protect the family so she came after me you know the rest after that". "So who did you mate with". I looked at moon and howled out loud " BLACK WOLF FORCED ME". Winter rushed over to me and I fell to the ground. Tears were streaming out of my eyes. "Its okay you don't have to explain know more" he said. I got up and said " No I am going to finsh. I was on my way home ,from visting my mothers grave when Black Wolf  and three other wolfs came and traped me in. than Black wolf said "I seen you visting your mothers dead body.Moonrise was such a beautiful wolf she always was scared of me. you look just like your mother." " What do you want from me. let me go home" I said. "I show you what I want" and than the three wolves held me down and Black wolf. I stopped I could not finsh. Winter held me tightly in his paws and I never wanted him to let me go. I looked outside the sun was away, the sky was full of billions stars and the moon was full. I looked at winter than said " Its time I am ready to give birth". " You would be early" he said looking worried. The sky told me it was time". That night I gave birth to Three beautiful pups. One girl two boys who I name Stardust my daugher who looked just like me. Solar my first son who looked like my father and my last son Nightfall who looked just like Black Wolf which scared me a'lot.

   

Chapter 6

Black Wolf

I Licked my pups clean. They were so beautiful and fragile and helpless. Solar was born first, Than Stardust, and last Nightfall. Winter Walked over to them and licked everyone. He made me smile and I wished they were his pups. "You gave birth the really beautiful pups you are really lucky." "the way I had to make these pups was horrible and I blame Myself for that, I blame myself for a'lot of things." "You can't keep blaming yourself for these things Starlight" said my love. "Come on let's get some sleep o.k" said Winter as he layed beside me and the pups. we all went to sleep and I became a new mom.

I woke up outside the den. It was bitter cold and I was freezing I also was wondering how I ended up outside the den. I went inside and Winter was laying inside with his body turned toward the den wall. I then looked around for my pups Stardust and Solar were sleeping but nightfall was missing. I looked around the cave, he was nowhere in sight. I began to panic and I dashed to the entrance to look outside when Black Wolf steped in front of me with Nightfall hanging out of his mouth. He set Nightfall on the ground and began to walk towards me."Starlight my beauty why didn't you tell me our pups were born they are so pretty" said Black Wolf with his most scarest voice. My heart was pounding. "What are you doing here leave before Winter wake up and kills you." I said. "Ha you know the black pup looks a'lot like me maybe I suched take him with me and raise him myself and have another evil black wolf running these parts". "You would never take Nightfall wake up Winter Black Wolf is here" I said Noticing Winter was still sleeping. " Why don't you tell him the truth about you and me remember, tell him the truth Starlight tell him". "No I will not" I said nugging Winter. " You can't tell him anyway because he is dead hahaha". I looked at Winter his fur was stained red his neck was bleeding.I screamed and woke up.

It was a nightmare. I looked at my pups they were still sleep.Than I looked At winter who was sleeping also I knew I would have to tell him the truth about Black Wolf.