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Mayella of Lynx

Last post 06-27-2008, 3:27 PM by NatureVetGirl. 43 replies.
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  •  05-24-2008, 11:54 PM 101155 in reply to 100570

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    I like it!

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  •  05-26-2008, 3:08 PM 101326 in reply to 101155

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    I love this story, this is glorious, the type that i would bye if you got it published.  This is Amazing, NVG, this is so amazingly good
    http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=1952512&PHPSESSID=30bbb46e250b2d071386208f683fa08a
  •  05-28-2008, 10:25 PM 101777 in reply to 101326

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

       Mayella sat with her little ones behind a bit of brush. Her blue tail flicked around as she hunched over. "Okay, JudgeMent, one more time, now. I want you to go out and catch that birdie."

       JudgeMent growled and wriggled with excitement. How glorious it would be when he caught his first bird! "Don't worry, Mama. I'll catch that biddie no matter what."

       "Good," Mayella smiled slyly, "Now... go!"

       JudgeMent lunged out, thrashing at the little bird. It zoomed away quickly, and JudgeMent sat, paws in the air, empty. "Mama, I suck at this biddie catching. Can we go back to meece?"

       "Judge! No, you gotta learn to catch birds, mice, and hare, not to mention countless other prey... But for now, come back, let Sorrow have a try."

       "I'd be happy to," Sorrow growled, dipping down low. Soon another birdie perched on the ground. Sorrow lept, flying through the air, at the bird. Mayella turned, too late.

       "No, Sorrow! Not that type of bird!" She dashed out from the brush, charging the bird. It spread it's wings to an amazing width, and smacked Mayella away. Sorrow tried galloping back, but made it not far before the eagle had her in it's great beak.

       It was the most massive eagle Mayella had ever seen. Great and golden with gray flecked feathers, and a deep yellow beak. It's thick talons were shingin black, and it's legs a dark yellow-gray.

       Mayella started up again, but was smashed back to the earth. The giant eagle went to take off, but it's wings hit trees on either side. It could never make it out. So the eagle, with Sorrow in it's beak, started slowly running through the thick vegetation of the forest floor.

       Hurt, Mayella knew she could do nothing to get her darling back. But she also knew that the wind was blowing towards the area her mate was hunting in. She knew that wind carried scent and sound. She knew that she could not save her dear, but her husband could.

       "JaxClaw! Get Sorrow! She is in the beak of a giant golden eagle! It cannot fly until the clearing, and I am injured, save our darling!"

       Now she could only hope that the message reached him in time.  

     

       Meanwhile, Sorrow was smarting all over. Her paws hurt. Her head hurt. Her spine hurt. She looked around as well as she could from the bird's harsh grip. She squeaked in agony as the bird tumbled over stones. It wasn't sure-footed. if she could only wiggle out and get under some brush...

       Sorrow wiggled as much as she dare without hurting herself further. She grasped the air with her paws, clawing loose feathers that floated past on the light wind. An idea flashed through her mind. She reached a paw over, close to the bird's head, and thrust her claws full-force into the soft, feathered flesh. The bird screamed, letting go of the lynx in the process.

       She tried to run, but suddenly felt a tug. She was grabbed none-too-lightly and yanked beneath a small boulder, into a hole. From there she watched the eagle search for it's meal. Finally is sauntered off, bewildered and aggravated.

       "Hello, cat," said a friendly voice from deeper in the hole.

       Startled, Sorrow yelped, but was otherwise silent.

       "What's the matter, cat got your tongue?" Snickering came from below. "No worry, least it's not an eagle. But the coast is clear, and it's stuffy down here. Get out before we all suffocate." A murmured agreement sounded.

       Sorrow climbed out, slowly. She stopped, chills up her spine, and turned around.

       A badger crawled out, it's roly-poly body dragging on the ground. "Why, hello, cat. Now you see me, won't you talk? Fine, you won't talk, I will. I'm Asali."

       A little white mink came out. Sorrow was amazed at the sight of something so white- it wasn't even winter! "I'm Azira. Nice t'meet ya." She slunk around to the lynx's side, and raised a paw to shake. The cat hissed. "Oh, shush, you. Yer just a kitten, not bigger'n Asali here. Scarce bigger'n me. Oh, wait'll you see..." She snickered quietly. "Oh, com'out you big lug!"

       Finally a giant animal that Sorrow had never seen before stepped out. It was sleek and weasel-like, with red sides and a deep black back. It's eyes had a light red fur around them, and the giant black pupils contradicted with them greatly. "I'm Azul. Nice meetin' you, cat. What is you, 'ways?"

       Sorrow found her voice, "I'm Sorrow... I'm a lynx."

       "Ay, Sorrer, that's purty name," Azul said, "By the way, I'm a wolv'rine. Nuttin' great 'bout me, 'cept m'size."

       "An' yer way o' talkin', real unique," Azira said, snickering more.

       "And your's is no worse, Az!? Smooth, buddy, I'm sorry to say, but you are no better than Azu."

       Azira stopped snickering to stick her tongue out at Asali, "Well, Azu here ain't gunna make fun o' me for my snick'rin' li'e you, 'ere."

       "Who says I ain't, Az'ra? I make fun o' you as much as I make fun o' this littl'n. 'Er spots're somepin' to laugh at, y'know."

       "Lez not make fun o' the littl'n, Azu. She be new, so lez not push't."

       "Yeah, lets not push it, guys. Not stop your chattin' and comfort the gal," Asali growled. She walked up to Sorrow, long claws digging into the earth. Sorrow stepped back.

       "S-s-s-stay away, badger..."

       "I'm Asali."

       "Whoever you are! Don't hurt me, please!"

       All three chuckled. "We won't hurt you! We saved you, Sorrow," Asali grinned.

       "Yeah, w'did. Can I'call ya Sore? Li'e, it'll make it easier," Azul crept up.

       Sorrow sighed. There was no getting away. "Fine. Call be Sore, or Sorrer, or whatever. Just don't hurt me. And if mama comes, you don't hurt her either."

       "Hows about this- we help ya find yer ma, but you give us pr'tect'on, all wi'ter from biggo creatos sich's bear an' coug'. Y'in?" Azira asked.

       "Yes... I'm... in..."

        Story's taking a new turn! Did you expect it?

        


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  •  05-28-2008, 10:37 PM 101784 in reply to 101777

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    yeah! Very good, love it, a whole new turn!

    I am:
    The
    Phoenixes Song,
    Dragons Flame,
    Pegasuase Wings,
    Sphinxes Riddle,
    Baskilics Eyes,
    Griffins Talons,
    And The
    World's Beauty!
  •  05-28-2008, 10:38 PM 101785 in reply to 101777

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    Wonderful, Great, love it, stupindous, more, more, more!

    I am:
    The
    Phoenixes Song,
    Dragons Flame,
    Pegasuase Wings,
    Sphinxes Riddle,
    Baskilics Eyes,
    Griffins Talons,
    And The
    World's Beauty!
  •  05-30-2008, 1:55 PM 101974 in reply to 101785

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    Heh, I'm liking your characters, and their accents are fun to read.  Nice new turn!
  •  05-30-2008, 7:52 PM 102100 in reply to 101974

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    i like it, i definatly wasn't expecting the turn, but its really good, please continueSmile [:)]Smile [:)]
    http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=1952512&PHPSESSID=30bbb46e250b2d071386208f683fa08a
  •  05-31-2008, 11:31 AM 102156 in reply to 101777

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

       "Sore, what's your mama's name?" Asali asked, "'Cause I met a little lynx when I was young. Could be her."

       "My mama is... Mayella. Mayella of Lynx." Sorrow stuttered uneasily.

       "Mayella... No, that wasn't the lynx. Though, I could swear, I heard the name before. Is she like, a prophet or something?"

       Sorrow thought about this, "Well, I never known of a prophet in the world of Lynx, but she does have gray eyes, and gray eyed lynxes aren't supposed to make it past birth... and her fur is pale, and her spots yellow, and she has no two-half."

       Azira snickered quietly, then burst into hysteric laughing, "A link without a t'-half! Whatta thought!"

       "Uh... yeah. But my daddy is JaxClaw. And I'm SorrowClaw. And my brothers are JudgeMent, and FlawClaw... and PityClaw, that's my little sister."

       "Don't worry, Sorrow. We aren't making fun of your mom, it's just that, since lynxes and wolves are the only animals around here with two-halfs, it's wierd that one doesn't have it. That's all. Now, you saw your dad is JaxClaw? I've never heard of him."

       "I 'ave. 'E killed a itty-'itty rabb't de o'er day. Fun watchin' 'im. I scared 'im off, took the meat, to eat, y'know, it was delicious." Azul growled, and went on about how delicious the hare meat was.

       "Azul, shut up! Jeez, boy, you go on... and on... and on..." Azira shouted.

       "Az'ra!"

       "And on... and on... and on..."

       Azul pounced over as quickly as he could, but not quick enough to catch the annoying little mink. Azira snickered, and bounded away.

       "Where did she go?" SorrowClaw asked, quietly.

       "Who knows? It doesn't matter, she always comes back. Let's go now, though, before it gets dark. I don't want to be crammed in that tiny hole all night, again." Asali trotted off, Sorrow and Azul following in a silence that was almost impossible for the wolverine to emit.


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  •  06-01-2008, 9:35 PM 102391 in reply to 102156

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    This is a very good story. Please Continue, Wonderful, Stupindous, and completly Great!

    I am:
    The
    Phoenixes Song,
    Dragons Flame,
    Pegasuase Wings,
    Sphinxes Riddle,
    Baskilics Eyes,
    Griffins Talons,
    And The
    World's Beauty!
  •  06-14-2008, 11:17 PM 104401 in reply to 102391

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    Are you going to write more?

     



    I am:
    The
    Phoenixes Song,
    Dragons Flame,
    Pegasuase Wings,
    Sphinxes Riddle,
    Baskilics Eyes,
    Griffins Talons,
    And The
    World's Beauty!
  •  06-16-2008, 8:33 PM 104765 in reply to 104401

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    Dragonriders:

    Are you going to write more?

     

    Yeah, I will, but I don't know where I'm going with it. It could be a week or longer before I post more, sorry about that. I also am STUDY STUDY STUDYING for finals, because my teacher isn't very good at teaching. She should go back to Costa Rica, backpacking, like she used to before coming to Canada as a teacher... :P Aw well, don't worry I WILL right more, when tests are over. Probably a week.


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  •  06-20-2008, 6:31 PM 105634 in reply to 104765

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    Please please please continue, i love this story!
    http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=1952512&PHPSESSID=30bbb46e250b2d071386208f683fa08a
  •  06-20-2008, 8:20 PM 105674 in reply to 105634

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    Okay, everyone, seeing as the forums are closing, I will write more. But not on these forums.

    If you would like to hear more you can email me at molly_s@petlover.com or (if you don't have email, otherwise please use method 1) you can post in the "comments and suggestions" page about Mayella of Lynx on my site: www.freewebs.com/naturevetgirl

    thanks for all the comments guys.

    -nvg


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  •  06-27-2008, 3:27 PM 106424 in reply to 99229

    Re: Mayella of Lynx

    bye bye everyone!!!!!!!!!!

    ....


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