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Hey peoples! I guess since I'm only gonna be here for a day or two, I'll write the next chapter.
                                                              Chapter 5
"Okay, cubs. You see those gazelles over there?" I asked them. "Yeah." "Awww... their so cute!" Naomi said. I sighed and said, "Naomi, they may be cute, but we eat the gazelle." "You mean we...." " Yes, we kill them." I said. Naomi's ears went down sadly and then she asked, "We don't kill the babies do we?" "Sometimes we do. But only if it's nesscessary." I answered.  "Okay, will you shut up so mom can show us how to hunt?" Tonori snapped. Naomi growled at him and then got quiet. "Okay, watch and learn cubs." I said leading the pride slowly into the plains. I crouched down and watched intently as the gazelle's ears went up. "Now!" I roared as we chased down the gazelle. After about ten minutes, we took down the biggest one. "Now come on you two." I said. Tonori and Naomi ran over to the dead gazelle and sniffed it. Tonori began to eat while Naomi stared at it. "What's wrong?" I asked. "I.... I feel bad." She said. "Why?" I asked. "This poor gazelle lost it's life, how do you think it's family feels?" She said starting to cry. "Now Naomi, let me tell you something. If we don't kill the gazelle, the we'll die. It's all a part of the great circle of life." I said. "Oh. Mom?" "Yes?" "Is it okay if I become a vegetarian?"

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It's pretty good, but too much dialogue for me. Its very hard to read.

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                                                              Chapter 6
We all laid under a tree as we slept for the night. I stayed up alert and ready in case of poachers. I could never forget how I spent the first year of my life being tormented by humans. I was never going to let my cubs suffer through the same thing. I pricked up my ears as I heard a sudden noise. I stood up and growled softly. I didn't like the sound at all. I slowly crept around and noticed a large van. "Oh no...." I said to myself. They weren't far from my pride and soon they'd come after my cubs. I had to do something. I quickly ran over to the van and sniffed around. The poachers didn't seem to be around so now was my only chance. I wrapped my jaws onto their tire and squeezed down hard. PHFFF! "Great, now all I have to do is get my pride out of here." I said running off. I quickly nudged my cubs and Xavier awake. Then I woke up my mom and Zyoe. Everyone else in the pride woke up tiredly and looked at me. "Listen, there's poachers close by. We need to get out of here." I said. "Poachers?" Tonori asked. "Yes, poachers." I said picking him up. Xavier grabbed Naomi and we all set out to a safer place. As I was walking I couldn't help but remember my past adventure. I learned a lot about humans and life beyond the pride. But one thing I couldn't forget was how my father somehow became a human and saved me from the zoo. I wonder if he's still out there, watching over me and my cubs. But I wouldn't have to wonder for long....

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so thats who it is!!

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I love it! I love how it is written because it keeps my attention. MORE!

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Hello! Why dosent PikiaFuey post ANY new chapters!? ugh post something!

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yeah! post something!! *lunges to eat pikafuy alive*!!

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*Catches Landon and calms him down* Sorry I haven't wrote much. I've been punished from the computer for quite some time and haven't been able to post anything. But I'll be here tonight so I'll post chapter 7.

                                                Chapter 7

That next morning I awoke to a loud clap of thunder. I sat up and realized something wasn't right. Someone was missing. "Tonori? Naomi? Oh my god! Mom! Xavier! Zyoe! Get up!" I screamed. "What is it?!" Zyoe jumped. "The cubs, their gone!" I cried. Xavier roared and everyone in the pride woke up. "Everyone, the cubs are missing." The pride all went into a tizzy and started to get nervous. "So we all need to get out there and find them. The storm is coming in and their in danger." Xavier announced. We all split up. But I went solo. I needed to be on my own. I prowled through the savannah and searched everywhere. When I saw my cubs being hualed onto a truck. "Nooo!" I screamed, running after them. "Mommy!" They screamed. I roared and chased the truck. But I had fallen and had lost them. Lost them in my pride. The storm rolled in with a downpour and I sat there hopelessley lost in my own sadness....

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*Sniffle* Sad... more though.

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poor cubs... :( :( ME WANT MORE!

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