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It dosen't have alot of animals in it but its still a good story.

                               Chapter One

 Goal! And the green team wins! Great game huh Julia? Yes, you always scoring the winning goal.I said. I'm 15 and my friend Josh is  17. Josh loves soccer I actully went to one of his games today. Hey I have some news! What Josh? I won a free boat trip to some island! And? And I'm bringing you and Riley! Whos Riley? I asked Josh. Rileys a friend. Do you know what island it is Josh? I laughed. Uh.. no. Meet me at the dock tomarrow o.k.? Sure Josh. I arrived at the dock early the next morning. Josh! Over here! Josh yelled. I walked over. Hello Captain Josh. Don't call me captain. Are we leaving? A girl asked. Julia this is Riley. Riley this is Julia.Hello. Riley said. Hi. I said to Riley. Lets go. So Josh. I said as we were getting on the small boat. This is our "free" boating trip? Yes it is Julia and I'm in charge. Ok captain Josh.Riley said laughing. Josh rolled his eyes. A few hours later we were in the middle of the ocean. Hi Josh I mean captain Josh. I laughed. My name is not captain Josh! Josh yelled anoyed. I grinned. Well goodnight captain Josh. Riley said. Josh groaned and walked away. I woke up later that night from Josh yelling my name. Julia! Riley! I sat up and looked at Josh. What are you doing? I asked rubbing my eyes. Theres a storm outside and this boat may not make it. What do you mean? Riley asked worried. We might crash. Where we are in the middle of the ocean! I yelled. I hate you Josh. I said. I know you do. Josh replied. A huge wave swept over the small boat.

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Thanks. If your the only one reading it here.

                                            Chapter Two

I woke up on a beach. I looked around the area. All I saw was sand,the ocean and a forest.Well I guess we did crash on a island. I said to my self. I heard someone walking on the beach. Julia! A surprised voice said. I looked over and saw Riley. Julia do know where Josh is? Over here! I heard Josh yell. Yay he's alive. I said sarcasticty. We saw Josh run over. Ok where are we? I asked. I have no clue. Said Josh. Ok lets look for shelter or atleast something to sleep in. Josh said. Me and Riley nodded and walked away. I looked around and in five minutes found a cave. A cave? I thought. Oh well its something. I said to myself. I walked in and saw a thing that looked like a well bought to shallow and big. About 15 feet of rope in a pile and two rocks. Josh and Riley saw me and ran over. Did you find this? What do you think? Yes. Josh you make a fire and me and Riley will get food. Ok. I walked along the beach while the waves crashed against the shore. I didn't see anything and I didn't expect to find anything. I collected a few rocks so I could make a spear and searched for Riley. Hey Julia look what I found. Riley said when I met her further down the beach. She was holding a small crab by one of its legs. I saw three but they were in the water, too hard to catch. Said Riley. This one was buried in the sand. How are we going to cook a crab? I asked Riley. Thats the hard part. Maybe Josh knows how to cook crab. I said. Probly not. Hes a boy. Oh I forgot. I said laughing. We walked back to the cave.

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I'm not really 15 and Josh isen't 17. And Josh is actully my cusin. I'm 10 and hes the same.

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I'm bored so....

                                             Chapter 3

Josh said that he didn't know how to cook crab, he didn't know how to cook anything. Riley cooked the crab while I made my spear. We didn't get much meat out of the small red crab but I didn't care. I walked out to the beach  and looked for our boat that sank but didn't see it. I walked down a small strech of rock that was almost covered with water. It went out to sea a little then stopped. I reached the end and looked down at the water. I saw a bunch of brightly colored fish and a peice of metal. I looked closer and saw a part of the ship. I turned around and saw Josh watching curiously. He walked over to the end of the rock. What are you doing? He asked looking down at the water. I found the boat. Which is now at the ocean floor. I said to Josh. Oh. What are we going to sleep on? Josh asked. I don't know yet. Maybe I can use you as a bed. I said grinning. You do that. Josh how about you make your self useful and swim into the boat. Why? Beacuse maybe theres something useful down there. I said to Josh who was now glaring at me. Ok but the stuff probley washed away said Josh. Whatever. Just go down there Josh. I'm going! He took a breath and jumped in. I looked at the sky. The sun was just going down spreading gold,yellow and red across the waves of the ocean. I was staring at it when I heard a loud splash. I'm going down again! Josh yelled behind me. I looked behind me and saw josh floating in the water. Ok go down don't have to tell me. A few birds flew out into the sunset and I saw a few dolphins swiming out in the ocean.

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                                          Chapter 4

 Another loud splash and Josh yelled. I found a few hammocks! Hammocks? I said turning around. Josh climbed onto the rocks holding two hammocks. Josh theres only two. I said. I know me and Riley get the hammocks and you get the floor. No Josh you get the floor. He rolled his eyes and walked past me and headed for the beach. I looked over my shoulder and heard a high pitched squeak. One of the dolphins jumped up and swam over. It stuck its head out of the water. Do you want me to pet you?  I asked. I reached my hand out to touch it. Surprisingly it didn't move when I touched it. Its skin was rubbery and smooth. Julia! Are you coming? Called Josh from the beach. Yeah! Bye uh... dolphin? That isen't really a name, But it will work. It sqeaked and swam away. I ran back to the shore. I looked down the long beach and saw Josh kneeling down examing something. I ran over and asked what he found. Josh stood up and pointed to an old fishing net. We could us it for a hammock. Said Josh picking it up. Perfect you could use it. I laughed. No you can Julia. Come on lets go back to the cave. Josh nodded and we headed back.

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                                          Chapter 4

 Another loud splash and Josh yelled. I found a few hammocks! Hammocks? I said turning around. Josh climbed onto the rocks holding two hammocks. Josh theres only two. I said. I know me and Riley get the hammocks and you get the floor. No Josh you get the floor. He rolled his eyes and walked past me and headed for the beach. I looked over my shoulder and heard a high pitched squeak. One of the dolphins jumped up and swam over. It stuck its head out of the water. Do you want me to pet you?  I asked. I reached my hand out to touch it. Surprisingly it didn't move when I touched it. Its skin was rubbery and smooth. Julia! Are you coming? Called Josh from the beach. Yeah! Bye uh... dolphin? That isen't really a name, But it will work. It sqeaked and swam away. I ran back to the shore. I looked down the long beach and saw Josh kneeling down examing something. I ran over and asked what he found. Josh stood up and pointed to an old fishing net. We could us it for a hammock. Said Josh picking it up. Perfect you could use it. I laughed. No you can Julia. Come on lets go back to the cave. Josh nodded and we headed back.

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* sighs*

                                          Chapter 5

Me and Josh put our hammocks on the cave walls where rocks were sticking out. Riley took the fishing net that Josh found and was cleaning it. When my hammock was set up I yelled good night and went to sleep. I woke up to something small crawling on me. Ahhhhh! I screamed and fell out of my hammock. What? Asked Riley who woke up from my screaming. I looked over and saw Josh smiling. Josh! What there was a mouse on you! He laughed. You put it on me didn't you? Maybe. Josh said. I groaned and stood up. Josh you go find something eat I'll cook it. I said. Josh sighed and walked outside. An hour later Josh came back with three fish. I looked around and noticed that Josh had took my spear. I cooked the fish by putting them on a peice of metal ( from the boat) the metal was a few inches off the fire. A few sticks holding it up. I flipped the fish every few minutes with a clean stick. It took 15 minutes to cook them. I didn't really know how to cook ether, so it was not the best food. When we finished eating I walked out to the beach with Riley. So Riley, do you have any clue where we are? No.  Thats good to hear. I said smiling. We were walking along the beach when I tripped on something. Wahhh! Ugh. Riley helped me up and looked for what I tripped on.

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Someone has to post if I will ever post another chapter again. ( please post something)

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Please, continue!

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im still reading what u r writing i like it a lot

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Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited, whereas imagination embraces the entire world, stimulating progress, giving birth to evolution.
~Albert Einstein

Thanks. I got actuall coments! Heres the next chapter!( I know its long )                                       Chapter 6

 Hey! A coconut. Riley said picking up the brown nut. Are there more? I asked Riley. Up in the tree duh. I ment on the ground. No theres nothing. Can you crack it? I asked Riley knowing she coulden't. Why do think I can? I don't know. I know Josh can't! I said laughing. Try smashing it on a rock or something. I said. We aren't cavemen! I know. I replied. We're people on a island with coconuts and small crabs! I laughed. Julia, go hunting or something with your spear. I headed into the forest trying to find something to spear. I heard something moving and looked for the wild animal making the noise. I saw a wild boar digging at the dirt with it's tusks. I crept forward and hid in the plants. I dragged the wild boar back to the cave while the sun hid behind the ocean. I met Josh near the cave entrance. Hi Josh. I have food. I said bragging. Good for you now cook it. No Josh you should. I said back to Josh. I will! Called Riley from the cave. See she'll do it. Said Josh looking at me. I dragged the boar by it's back legs. It was atleast over 100 pounds and would feed us for maybe 2 or 3 days. Riley cooked a big peice of the large boar. The meat tasted like normal pig. Like I expected. I went outside of the cave. There was a river that ran down a hill near the cave and went on. The island was huge! I crossed the river at the bottom of the hill and countinued into the jungle. After ten minutes of walking around, I felt something watching me. Nice try Josh but you aren't scaring me! No answer. I looked around and kept walking. I heard a soft growl and I turned around. I saw two eyes gleaming at me from the plants and trees. Something jumped out and started chasing me. I turned around and ran as fast as I could. I looked at the ground and saw my spear from earlyer. I quickly grabed it and faced the animal.

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                                                      Chapter 7 

I got a few seconds to study the wild creature. I was looking at  the largest big cat on earth. The tiger. It snarled and pounced at me. I doged it and tryed to hit it with my spear, but missed. It swatted at me with its paw. I doged it again. It jumped up and I hit its front leg with my spear. The tiger decided that it wasen't worth fighting me. It snarled and ran off. I stood there amazed, looking around for anything else. I saw something moving ahead. I groaned. A pack of wolves came running out from behind a bunch of plants. They came running at me and I ran through the  jungle. I dropped my spear when I was fighting the tiger. So I couldn't fight them. There were six wolves in that pack. Too many to fight. I saw a branch of a tree low to the ground. I jumped up onto the branch. I heard it starting to crack so I pulled my self on a higher, stronger branch. The wolves jumped at the tree and growled, but couldn't get up. They wouldn't give up. I was up there for atleast an hour when one of the wolves sniffed the air, barked and ran off. The other wolves followed.

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Dum Dee Dum Dum

                                                Chapter 8

I carefully climbed down and walked away. I kept scanning the area for other animals. From what I saw there could be anything out there! I told Riley and Josh about the tiger and wolves. Um... tigers and wolves? Riley said. Why would there be tigers and wolves living together on a island? Josh asked. I don't know. I replied. They don't live together. Tiger belongs in the jungle and the wolf belongs in the forest. How did it end up here? Riley asked. Don't ask me all I know is that they both want to kill me. I said. Josh sence I was chased by to wild animals today. Do some hunting Ok? Riley hasen't done any hunting yet. Josh said. Riley come on you don't even have a excuse! I know. I'll go hunting. Noticing that she said hunting. More like fishing!  I'm not going any where near the jungle! Riley said leaving to go fishing.

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Nice.And its Nice as in Ice, not nice as in niese.
Lolth

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