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The Wolf's Prophecy

Last post 06-22-2008, 6:29 PM by HawkFire. 126 replies.
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  •  04-19-2008, 1:46 PM 96606 in reply to 96426

    Re: The Wolf's Prophecy

    I'm glad that chapters will be posted more often, this is soo interesting, you are an amazing writer, i wish that i could write like thatSmile [:)]
    http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=1952512&PHPSESSID=30bbb46e250b2d071386208f683fa08a
  •  04-20-2008, 1:40 PM 96676 in reply to 94481

    Cool

    Nice! I love your story, 1 I love wolves 2 Thunder is my name on Wolf Quest! Great Job Keep up the good work!
  •  04-20-2008, 7:59 PM 96762 in reply to 96676

    Re: Cool

    Tiger* Flame   Tanna's my name. *Whimper* But I accidently overwrited the saved game fili I had for her...

    Animals Rule!   Yeah, I read how famous authors write, and I see how they describe stuff, I see what words they use, and I see how much they write for what. That just helps, though. I made all these ideas myself, and the style of writing is mine.

     

  •  04-22-2008, 9:01 PM 97069 in reply to 96762

    Re: Cool

     Wierd. I already posted this chapter, and it didn't come through.

     

    So it was decided. Wind would go alone to find the wolf pack.

    This, of course, infuriated Storm, for she never liked being left out of something. She was stubborn and independent, too. That led her to her decision.

    She would follow Wind.

    She knew, obviously, that Wind would be quite angry if he found out, and she didn’t even know when he was leaving, or if he would leave in secret. It would also be a very dangerous journey, and the journey would also take them into uncharted territory. So she had absolutely no idea what she or Wind would find.

         Storm spent a few days watching and waiting. On the fifth day, in the dead of the night, she finally saw Wind get up. He slowly and quietly padded to the entry way. Storm wondered if he was leaving without telling Frost. Probably not, thought Storm. It was likely that they had talked about it when they had been out hunting alone.

         Storm waited for a while, and when her father’s pawsteps faded in the distance, she silently rose and creeped to the cave opening. She followed his scent trail, and quickened her pace with excitement, the kind of thrill you get sometimes when you’re breaking the rules. Though soon she spotted him trekking on the horizon. She instantly slowed. He couldn’t find out she was following him too soon, or he would just send her home. No, it would do better to reveal herself later.

     

         Five days. That was how long Storm had been tracking her father. She was so tired; she was nearly falling asleep on her paws! She was amazed her father could keep up such a pace.

         But they had a lot to show for it; they were nearly across the Dragon Crest. Normally it would take a week to get there, but Wind was going full speed. He must have really thought that it was important to save the far-away wolf pack.

         Storm looked up. Her father had just disappeared. She chased after him, trying not to kick down any rocks. Her stomach grumbled; she hadn’t eaten today yet. I’ll just have to grab a cave mouse further up, she thought.

         Soon he came into sight again, so she continued to pursue him. But before she knew it, Wind had disappeared again. When Storm climbed over the next ridge, she saw where he had gone. In front of her stood a big, gaping cave mouth. Storm sniffed the air. It smelled of her father, so she quickly entered, trying not to think of the beasts that might live within.

         As she traveled on, the light quickly faded into deep darkness. And without the distant birdsong and the sound of wind, everything echoed. Water dripped all around, and with the reverberation, it made Storm feel like she was under a frozen river.

         Before she knew it, there was a fork in the path. Scenting the air, she took the left tunnel. Racing full speed, she didn’t notice a puddle until it was too late. She slipped, and crashed into the wall. This must be the single most dangerous thing I’ve ever done, Storm thought miserably. She quickly stood up and continued more slowly down the rocky passageway.

         Another fork appeared. One was a thin crack, and the other was a wide, dark cavern. The crack looked safer, but she wondered if it might narrow. If it was a dead end she would have a hard time getting out, if she could get out at all. The other path smelled of bear, but it wouldn’t be a danger if it ended at a wall. Thinking quickly, she trusted her instincts and leaped into the crack.

         She pushed herself along, and luckily the crevice did not shrink. Calming down more, she suddenly noticed it smelled like Wind. With new strength, she trotted faster. In fact, with her eagerness she began to run. Her pawsteps echoed loudly.

         Is that light ahead? Storm wondered. She squinted. It was! Wind must have gone this way, and out into the open wide space. Or was this still in the Dragon Crest Mountains? No time to think of that now; I’ll find out soon enough, Storm figured.

    But, sadly, she hadn’t thought of all the possibilities.

    Racing as if her life depended on it, she sprinted faster and faster. But then she realized where she was headed. Turning sideways to stop herself, she quickly slowed. And not a moment too soon; pebbles showered over the edge of the cliff.

         Storm looked out a gasped. She had come this close to falling over a gorge so deep she could barely see the bottom. Had Wind really come this way? Or maybe, Storm thought in fear, he’s dying and broken at the bottom of this canyon.    

  •  04-28-2008, 6:29 PM 97919 in reply to 97069

    Re: Cool

    Sigh... Once more this thread goes unnoticed. Say so if you want me to continue. I just haven't been in the writing mood recently, but if you all want me too......
  •  04-29-2008, 4:01 PM 98025 in reply to 97919

    Re: Cool

    I can wait untill your in the writing mood.
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  •  04-29-2008, 5:34 PM 98056 in reply to 97919

    Re: Cool

    Okay, nevermind. I just wrote some. And sorry if there is a mess up (like me saying it's night, then saying it's dark).

         The wind suddenly changed, and blew into Storm’s face. It brought the sound of howling. Could it be Wind? No, Storm thought, it doesn’t sound like him. I hope I’m not going into another wolf’s territory.

         But the wind also brought Storm a whiff of her father’s scent. When she looked closer, she saw him on the other side, trying to scramble up a ledge. Seeing that he had jumped, Storm looked around to see if there were any other outcroppings. She only saw one, and it was below her. Gulping, she jumped as high as she could.

         At first, she sailed through the air. She relaxed, feeling as if she would make it after all.

    And she was right. Almost.

         She was just at the other side, and she suddenly realized that the gorge wasn’t as wide as she had thought. Her forepaws struck rock, and Wind looked back instantly at the noise. He was about to scold her, but the words died in his throat. Storm’s hind paws were clawing at the stone, for they had not landed. Struggling to get a grip, Storm almost called for help. But she was in too much shock and surprise for her thoughts to work right. Wind, too, couldn’t react, much to the horror to Storm.     

         Thinking fast, Storm grabbed for the crack in the rock next to Wind’s paw. Using the pawhold, she managed to pull up. She crouched for a moment, and caught her breath. Phew! Storm gasped.

         Wind looked up to the sunlight sky.

    “The cliff top isn’t far; let’s see if we can climb.”

     

  •  04-30-2008, 12:26 AM 98122 in reply to 98056

    Re: Cool

    Really really really good, you are a fantastice writer Firesong
    http://www.uploadhouse.com/viewfile.php?id=1952512&PHPSESSID=30bbb46e250b2d071386208f683fa08a
  •  04-30-2008, 5:10 PM 98189 in reply to 98122

    Re: Cool

    This is really good please write more. PLEASE!

    I am:
    The
    Phoenixes Song,
    Dragons Flame,
    Pegasuase Wings,
    Sphinxes Riddle,
    Baskilics Eyes,
    Griffins Talons,
    And The
    World's Beauty!
  •  04-30-2008, 5:36 PM 98194 in reply to 98122

    Re: Cool

    What do you mean, you are a fantastic writer Firesong? Did you ge me mixed up? I'm HawkFire.
  •  04-30-2008, 5:54 PM 98197 in reply to 98189

    Re: Cool

    Perhaps I'll write smaller chapters. I should post on every few days or so.

         But hardly before he finished his sentence, a grey-brown muzzle peered over the cliff.
    Coyotes!
         More appeared until there were five snarling faces looking at them. Wind looked back at Storm, and mouthed the words, Climb now! I’ll be right after you. Without a second thought, Storm hooked the jagged stone and heaved herself over. Three of the coyotes surrounded her, the other two still guarding Wind. Storm felt uncomfortable; she couldn’t run away or break free, for on one side were coyotes, and on the other side was a sheer gorge.

     

  •  05-01-2008, 4:58 PM 98274 in reply to 98197

    Re: Cool

    OK, here it is.

     Storm turned, but she didn’t see Wind. How long would he be trapped? Storm gulped hard, and turned back to face the coyotes. The biggest one guarding her, one with a dark grey pelt, stepped forward. He was as big as her! The coyote snarled, and called over to someone behind Storm.

    “Keldari, what now?” the coyote growled.
     Storm saw one of the coyotes that were trapping Wind turn. It was even bigger then the other and it had a beautiful light grey fur.

    “Hmm… Well, what do we normally do to trespassers, Snake?” Storm was surprised; the coyote, who appeared to be their leader, was a female!   

     

  •  05-01-2008, 5:32 PM 98278 in reply to 98197

    Re: Cool

    Sweetness! Where do you come up with this stuff? It's pretty darn good, too! And origional. Maybe you can get it published !

    Please, oh please write more ( if you feel like it, of course)


    Salutations!
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    The forums are shutting down.
    But there iz still hope!
    Todaloo!


  •  05-01-2008, 8:10 PM 98303 in reply to 98278

    Re: Cool

      MUHAHHAHAHAH!!!! I'm soooo evil..................

     

       “Chase ‘um out.” Snake replied slyly.

    “Yes, but these wolves aren’t at our borders; they’re far inside our territory.” Keldari answered, with a horribly wicked smile.

    “So what, then?” Snake said; he had obviously not caught on to the she-coyote’s plan.

    “Look around you, Snake.” Storm hadn’t caught on either. Stop speaking in riddles! She screamed silently. Then she began to wonder why only Keldari and Snake spoke. Perhaps they were high ranking.

    “The gorge. We’re going to push them over, aren’t we?” the coyote beside Keldari whispered. The leader smiled, more evilly than before.

    “Yes.” She snickered.

    Storm had to stop them.

     

  •  05-01-2008, 8:13 PM 98304 in reply to 98278

    Re: Cool

    Emberstone:

    Sweetness! Where do you come up with this stuff? It's pretty darn good, too! And origional. Maybe you can get it published !

    Please, oh please write more ( if you feel like it, of course)

    Where do I come up with it? Hm.......... Well, my evilness comes from me hating entirely happy endings (some happyness is OK, but not when everything is fixed). And my other ideas, well, the cave one came from a Continue-The-Story game me and my friend made. And the rest just started. Then it changed, and revolved, and ran around, and finally poped out into words.

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