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Reading all those Warriors books has gone to my head. Battle! Tradegy! Doom!

     Storm turned, and launched herself away from the gorge, tears flowing from her eyes. She just ran and ran until she couldn’t run any more.

     Storm then gave in. Gave into hunger, exhaustion, sorrow, and anger, and dragged herself into a shallow under a snow-covered bush, and flopped down and pulled her tail over her nose. Now all she wanted to do was rest. She didn’t even want to think anymore. She just wanted to go to sleep and then wake up to find that this was all a dream. My only companion on this impossible journey; the wolf I love, is dead. And it’s all my fault!

     Storm woke up hours later, unaware of falling asleep. It was dawn. Storm was suddenly conscious of how hungry she was; she still hadn’t eaten.

 

Aww, i feel so bad for her, i just wanna give Storm a big  hug ( unless she has rabies and wants to bight my head offnn cuz then i don't think she would want a hug very much )

In my last post did i say " bought" it online? I ment read it. Here. On The forums. And now i'm replying. Ok. I'm  done.

Emberstone out yo.

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Salutations!
I am sad.
The forums are shutting down.
But there iz still hope!
Todaloo!

Emberstone:

 I agree one hundred percent with Dragonriders.

P.S. Sorry about the hole Harry Potter thing in my story. I wuv Harry Potter as much as the next guy. Infact, i wouldn't have mentioned any of the characters in that story if i didn't like them ( well, exept for Berrynose, because he's a stuck up). Anyway, I hope there is no hard feelings.

Sorry for straying off topic. Wind died? Poor Wind! Poor Storm! Mean old Mountain cliff thing!

Plz continue. And yes, i would buy this book, but  there kinda wouldn't be a point because i allready bought it on line. But i would by it for my cousin! She wuvs reading.

Wind died? Did I say that? 
                   *SPOLIER ALERT*
       (hint, hint) Remember what I said. I said "Whoever guesses what really happened to Wind gets a virtual pizza!"
                   *END SPOILER*

 

YetAnotherMember:

Mozart:

Sorry to dampen these spirits, but I do not see this book as one of those published novels. I see it as just another story, it's just like all the others...

 

 

Oh, so I suppose your stories are better than any of ours? We all suck at writing but you're the overlord of it? Is that it? Sorry to dampen your spirit, Mozart, but, what's gotten into you lately? You've gotten rude. Sorry if I seem mean, but you need to take a chill pill or something. You've been making mean comments everywhere.

 

 

 

But seriously, what's wrong?

*Nods Head* Yeah, what's the deal?

Ignore Motzart, she's not in her right head, listen to the majority rule, and we all say it could be published and is one great story!

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!

Sorry to dampen the sucess party you all seem to be celebrating, but when did I say my stories rock? Give us a link to the post, for all to see.

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HawkFire:

Wind died? Did I say that? 
                   *SPOLIER ALERT*
       (hint, hint) Remember what I said. I said "Whoever guesses what really happened to Wind gets a virtual pizza!"
                   *END SPOILER*

 

Hmm...did Wind turn into wind and fly away?

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Thanks Firesong for the awesome sig!

AKwoof:

HawkFire:

Wind died? Did I say that? 
                   *SPOLIER ALERT*
       (hint, hint) Remember what I said. I said "Whoever guesses what really happened to Wind gets a virtual pizza!"
                   *END SPOILER*

 

Hmm...did Wind turn into wind and fly away?

No. Godd idea, though. Keep guessing! (or just wait until the end)

New chapter!!!

     Storm then spied a ptarmigan pecking a few feet away. She slowly creeped up; a hunter’s best skill is patience. When she was close enough, she pouched. Wham!

     Quickly swallowing her kill, she padded forward to check out her surroundings. Behind her in the distance, she could see the edge of the canyon, where Wind… In front of her, Storm saw empty, snowy plains. She ran forward, but suddenly stopped. She didn’t even know where this distant pack lived. But then, Storm figured, I can’t exactly go back to the gorge. So, ahead we go!

 

Ohh the suspense. Must know more keep writing please. Must know what happens to Storm!

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!

Wow, this is an amazing story, poor poor Storm, oh and i'm going to guess that Wind is still alive, or maybe he will get brought back to life somehow *wow, that was a strange thought*

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Pictures:

Storm

Klip

     But before she had moved two pawsteps, she heard a bark behind her. At first she thought it was Wind, and then the memory came crashing upon her. Her vision clouded over as she remembered watching her father die. Then she suddenly jolted up and looked over her shoulder.

     What she was gazing upon amazed her. Behind her was a furry, smiling Arctic Fox! 

“I’m Klip! Who are you?” the fox yelped happily. Then seeing Storm’s face, he added more sullenly, “What’s wrong?”

“I- Uh- I’m St-Storm. A-And my father Wind, just- Just yesterday he-” Storm broke off and slowly breathed out. “Only yesterday my father and I were attacked by a band of coyotes, and he fell over the gorge.” Storm almost broke into tears.

“Those carrion eating coyotes! They’re such a scourge!” Storm jumped at the mention of the word, but Klip didn’t seem to notice. “But you know,” Klip added, “The gorge isn’t that deep. I even tested it with a pebble!”  

 

 

Um... I'm really sorry to disapoint you, but I've been thinking that I won't continue this story.

Reasons:
1. Mostly because I just got an awesome idea, and sooner or later once it's done I'll want to show someone. Guess what. if you google "The Wolf's Prophecy", this thread is on page 1. I don't want to be acussed of plagerisim.
2. Someone could steal my idea.

But... I could also share it with all you on the forum. It's mostly just a problem if I show it to my teacher.

What do you think?

no!!! don't stop writing!!!

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H.elp
O.ur
W.olves
L.ive!!!
the forums are gone....*cries* why?

NOOOOOO! YOU CAN'T END IT, YOU JUST CAN'T END IT!!!!!!

PLEASE SAY YOU WON'T END IT, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I am:
The
Phoenixes Song,
Dragons Flame,
Pegasuase Wings,
Sphinxes Riddle,
Baskilics Eyes,
Griffins Talons,
And The
World's Beauty!