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Hello and this is my second post. Well, anyway, What happens in here is I will say what is happening in the story and have a couple choices to pick from, and you vote on the one you like. then I continue the story based on the vote. well, enjoy!

 

This is the story of my childhood, and how I am this. Just what am I? Read along and Discover all you wonder of me.

I woke to find my self in a strange area, unsure of my surroundings. then- a miracle! I moved! I was unsure if I could do it again, but I could! soon my shaky paws were moving! I was quite proud of myself. Then -In a strong tug- I moved, as in away from where I was! then, a beautiful feeling I later learned was called "smelling". I went over to the area I soon would find was my mother. I nursed until I fell into a deep sleep. before I dozed, though, I "heard", I believe the sence is called, one last word: Silverclaw. I awoke to find mother gone from the area where I learned so much. Then, I noticed an exit to this wonderland. Now, I have to decide.

A: Leave the den on to see "outside the den"

B: Stay in the den and wait for mother to return

Remember, this is YOUR choice. Pick your path.

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Zareth Lemmming

Let me guess; another wolf story?

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Well, if you Wanted Honesty that's All You had to Say.

(sigh) wadda ya hold against wolfs? (yeah, yeah, I know. I probably just got a ZT forums V.I.P. on my bad side) -.- so which choice do you pick?

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Zareth Lemmming

A!

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YAY! He lived!
Quick! fetch the multi-headed giraffes! ( and the sludge ponies )

Explore your world, exit the den.

If you count the current wolf stories you'd see more than five.

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Well, if you Wanted Honesty that's All You had to Say.

Okay, I konw this isn't many votes, but it's pretty obvious which will win. oh, and this is chapter 2: A New World.

I inched my way out of the den to find my selfin an area full of strange scents. I wondered what they were. "but, enough of that," I thought. Then, I heard a sound like coming from my right side. "D-Don't kill me...,"I wimpered to the noise. wow, I thought, making noise was hard. the noise quicky crept closer to me until... "RRRAAAAWWWGH!" It said, mere inches away from me. I wimpered pathetically. the creature jabbed something into my left shoulder, and sent me back a few inches. I felt something warm trickle down my leg. My shoulder hurt so horribly... "now, you little sniveling runt," the creature said distastefully, "I am starving. you are young. I will teach you a new lesson. It's called, Life." I didn't like the sound of how he said that last word.

A: try to reason with the creature

B: run for it

C: attack the creature

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Zareth Lemmming

alpha-mare:

Let me guess; another wolf story?

Alpha mare we already had a thread for arguments about wolf stories don't make this one. I'm writing a wolf story what's sooooooooooooooooo bad about it? Sure everyone writes about them well if anyone wants a different story then go ahead and make one some people like to write stories about wolves and for people who say there's to many horse stories well just to clerify it I wrote the very first although it's gone now. But anywho chose A!

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*** Zootycoon. Amen.

~ Kate

I vote B!

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Thank you, Gabby! Love ya!

A

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Thanks Firesong for the awesome sig!

well, I know this isn't very many votes, buuuuuuuuut, here we go. (oh, and thanks Kate for getting alpha mare out of my hair about this story)

CHAPTER 2: A New World (cont.)

I tried to reason with the creature using the few words I knew, but it came out sounding like some things of which I will not go into detail. Anyhow, as I blabbered away, I heard another sound in the distance. It sounded like the creature as it came towards me, but there was something else. It sounded like... Mother? Mother came in and yelled, "Run! back to the den!" and I heard loud sounds from near the creature roared and said to me, we will see again." I heard him charge into mother, and mother respond with a pained wimper. I inched back to where I vaugely remembered the den was, and tumbled in. I was surprised to hear other wimpering, and could pick up some, "where muthuh?" I wimpered, relieved to have friends. Also, it seemed I was not the only one with trouble speaking. I managed to mumble, a barely understandable, "Fighting,". the voices and wimperings were silent. I listened to myself, and knew. I spoke, fluently! Fluently! then I noticed something. A new sense, I wish I had know sooner. Sight.

CHAPTER 3: Sight

I heard the the creature roar,  and run off. Then I heard mother go pick something up. she came in to the den with something in her mouth, which I would later learn was a deer, and dropped it. I also noticed something red on her shoulder. she ran over to me and nuzzled me like there was no tommorrow. Then, she asked the two words I hated her to ask. "What happened?"

A; tell the truth

B: lie

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Zareth Lemmming

Sorry, I was answering for the 1st chapter.  I change my vote to B.

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Thanks Firesong for the awesome sig!

kate:

alpha-mare:

Let me guess; another wolf story?

Alpha mare we already had a thread for arguments about wolf stories don't make this one. I'm writing a wolf story what's sooooooooooooooooo bad about it? Sure everyone writes about them well if anyone wants a different story then go ahead and make one some people like to write stories about wolves and for people who say there's to many horse stories well just to clerify it I wrote the very first although it's gone now. But anywho chose A!

Nothing. But do you know what happens if you eat a bunch of the same food in one week? You get my point. And I wrote one of the first horse stories.You know; she told us to guess what it's about.

Personally; I only like horses. They are unrivalled by any other animal in my eyes. Mozart has the right idea, be original. How can anyone be inique if we're all writing about the same thing?

~Alpha Mare

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Well, if you Wanted Honesty that's All You had to Say.

alpha-mare:

kate:

alpha-mare:

Let me guess; another wolf story?

Alpha mare we already had a thread for arguments about wolf stories don't make this one. I'm writing a wolf story what's sooooooooooooooooo bad about it? Sure everyone writes about them well if anyone wants a different story then go ahead and make one some people like to write stories about wolves and for people who say there's to many horse stories well just to clerify it I wrote the very first although it's gone now. But anywho chose A!

Nothing. But do you know what happens if you eat a bunch of the same food in one week? You get my point. And I wrote one of the first horse stories.You know; she told us to guess what it's about.

Personally; I only like horses. They are unrivalled by any other animal in my eyes. Mozart has the right idea, be original. How can anyone be inique if we're all writing about the same thing?

~Alpha Mare

Sorry was a little grouchy that day and yes horses are magnificeent I think I'll go talk to Samson for a while he has been a little grumpy. LOL. But anywho lets not make this an argument, apparently everyone is sick of wolf stories so lets just stop making them for a while until they are the "New fashion" once again right now it's going to be cats I can just tell.

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*** Zootycoon. Amen.

~ Kate

Ok, for Chapter 3: Sight, I vote A: tell the truth.

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Thanks Firesong for the awesome sig!

Alpha Mare, Kate, I would really appreciate it if you didn't argue on my story. go do it on somee other wolf story.

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Zareth Lemmming